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Thursday 22 November 2012

Hana's work


Letter to Pharaoh

Dear Pharaoh Kufu,

I have been one of your most loyal servants for over 15 years and I have been elected to write to you by my fellow workers. All of your workers agree that you should change our current working conditions, as it would be vital to help us complete you pyramids.

Firstly, it is essential that we should have short breaks. This is necessary because working 16 hours in the blistering heat and being dehydrated with no shade or water, means we cannot work, in addition, it is vital of you support us it is essential that we need breaks, because without them we will not be able to complete your pyramids, would you want to work in the blistering heat building your pyramids?

Furthermore, we would like to have medical care as in if we get hurt, surely someone like you would obviously understand. My friend was badly injured over a heavy and big rock and I wasn’t able to help him, if we have medical care all your salves will be fit, overall being slow and not completing your pyramid. It is ridiculous that everyday slaves die, just because we have no medical care.

In conclusion, please take my points into account. If you allow me and your workers to have medical care, short breaks, and I will insure you will do the right thing, therefore your pyramid will be completed quicker. How many more slaves have to die before you take action?

You’re sincerely from all your workers

By Hana

Friday 9 November 2012

Bilal's writing


    Mohamed Ali

 

Mohamed Ali was born on January 17th 1942 in Louisville, Kentucky (America). His father was Cassius Clay Sr and his mother’s name was Odessa Clay. The legend Mohamed Ali was a successful boxer; he started boxing at a very young age.

In the early stages of his career (12 years old) he won 100 consecutive wins, after a few successful years, Mohamed Ali for filled his dreams. He won a gold medal in the Olympics at the age of 18. He was loaded with success and found himself holding the light weight title later on the year.

In 1960 he broke the record as he won 19 matches and 15 knock out. He won the gold medal 3 times and the heavy weight title. He was and will remain the most popular boxer due to the fact he has a colourful personality.

He retired at 1981 but even though he has retired he will continue to be a significant figure and will continue to be one for years to come. Now he lays in bed as he has brain damage due to the fact his major veins are damage.           

Thursday 8 November 2012

Zulaikah's Work


Do We Still Need Zoos?


A large majority of animal activists have argued that having animals in zoos is completely unethical. However, many others believe it is necessary for zoos, due to the fact animals are safe and well away from their predators.

Foremost scientists argue that zoos provide food, water, shelter and especially medical treatment for the animals; therefore they are able to keep healthy. Furthermore, due to the number of extinctions zoos have successfully breaded many animals adding to the world’s population. In addition to this, young pupils have a fantastic opportunity to see the animals, which encourages them to learn more about them.

On the other hand, most animal activists believe that animals slowly lose their natural instincts, also that the unfortunate animals are incapable of roaming free, whereas in the wild they can accomplish absolutely anything. Following on, many others believe that animals are in this world for a reason not just for mankind’s entertainment.

Overall, statistics show that zoos are a healthy environment for animals, although they have been captured from their natural habitat. Have these vulnerable animals been treated fairly or have they been taken advantage of?

Miserable Monkey Trapped in Zoo