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Wednesday, 18 April 2012

Writer of the Week - Week 1


JOHN BISHOP’S WEEK OF HELL


Comedian John Bishop, 45, had just completed a torturous trianthalon, which includes cycling, running and rowing to Calais. This was for raising money for the poor communities around the globe, for a charity named Sports Relief.


As said , it was a tough challenge for John in account that it was raining very hard, there was too much blazing heat and it gets harder each time. John stated that the most difficult was waking up early. In addition to this painful challenge, there were terrible blisters and pains on the legs, although there were massages and ice baths.

This horrendous challenge was over at the second of March. Upon hearing he had  raised £1.6million, John beamed with pride because of his valiant bravery.”  That money will change lives !”John cried out. He was glad it was all brought to an end.

 
The reason John had excepted this challenge was because of his achievements. Thoughtfully, he desired to help others  who are in need of money. Despite the fact he was corrupted with horrible injuries, he still went for it.    “ No matter how hard it was, I never gave up”, John announced, while hearing his proud fans cheering for him.

To conclude, John Bishop could not believe he had raised so much! Could this be a dream for him? He was shocked and blown away! Bishop explained that all he thought about was charity, even though he had sleep deprivation. He was very contented that it was over, but was glad he raised £1.6 million.

John at the finish line.

Written by Imam

16 comments:

  1. Wow Imam! What a brilliant piece of writing. It definately deserves to be the first example of writing on our blog :)

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  2. Fantastic piece of writing Imam! Well done :)

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  3. nice work Imam :) I think this is a High 5 piece of writing :d

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  4. nice work imam :)

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  5. nice work man your writing is awsuem

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  6. Nice peice of writing ! Good VCOP! :D

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  7. VERY COOL, IMAM. BUT I DONT THINK I CAN SAY THE SAME ABOUT JOHN BISHOP'S HAIR-STYLE...

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  8. Well done Imam. Good use of vocabulary and very detailed!

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  9. cool :) Its awesome

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  10. Its a high level five for me Imam, keep up the fabulous work! :)

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  11. This is a higher level 5 ,you should be proud of yourself

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  12. Awesome ! x
    Wow Nice Piece Of Writing Mr Mahdi (Imam) Ha Ha Ha Ha

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  13. awesome piece of work

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  14. That was a high high level 5 Imam, even i can't do work like this!!

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