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Wednesday, 20 March 2013

Aisha.k's Writing


Mighty Mountain

Mighty mountain sleeping tranquilly

Peaceful as dove dormant in its nest

A blanket of diamonds keeping it warm

Peaceful paradise

 

Yawning loudly, awaking rom its deep sleep

Mighty mountain rumbling and trembling

Firing rocks hitting the earth

Steaming like a car

Whiffling loudly waking the trees

 

Livid Volcano is a grumbling giant

Destroyed everything in its path

Steaming like vicious lion

Demands awake firing rocks

Accelerate waiting for some food

Judgment day has arrived

 
From Aisha.k

1 comment:

  1. Great work Aisha I love the use of verbs to show how this mountain is really mighty! I also Love what you wrote at the end "Judgement day has arrived."

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