The Green Backed spider
The
Green Backed spider is a unique and a fabulous creature.
This
amazing creature lives in the Egyptian desert on top rocks and under sand.
Living in the sand, it stores food and is protected from predators, it is also protected
from the blazing sun.
This
unique animal eats flys, ants, and different kinds of spiders. Being 20cm long,
this spider likes to rip flesh from humans with its huge fangs. Mostly this it
loves to drink flesh from animals and humans. Having a long tongue to catch
insects from far distance.
This
amazing arachnid has eight eyes four on each side. This animal has two bodies
connected to one, also it camouflages at day time and glows at night. It has
unbreakable webs and outstanding grip.
These
animals are endangered because there nails make good medicine. They are very
poisonous and people can make that in to good medicine. These animals also like
to be hunt down because of their unbreakable silk webs.
It
will be a disgrace if these amazing animals die.
By Jay
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