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Wednesday 13 March 2013

Jay's work


The Green Backed spider

 

The Green Backed spider is a unique and a fabulous creature.

 

This amazing creature lives in the Egyptian desert on top rocks and under sand. Living in the sand, it stores food and is protected from predators, it is also protected from the blazing sun.

 

This unique animal eats flys, ants, and different kinds of spiders. Being 20cm long, this spider likes to rip flesh from humans with its huge fangs. Mostly this it loves to drink flesh from animals and humans. Having a long tongue to catch insects from far distance.

 

This amazing arachnid has eight eyes four on each side. This animal has two bodies connected to one, also it camouflages at day time and glows at night. It has unbreakable webs and outstanding grip.

 

These animals are endangered because there nails make good medicine. They are very poisonous and people can make that in to good medicine. These animals also like to be hunt down because of their unbreakable silk webs.

 

It will be a disgrace if these amazing animals die.

 

By Jay

3 comments:

  1. Great work Jay! I like your puncuation and your use of openers.

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  2. Great work. Good use of punchuaton inside the piece of writing

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  3. GREAT!

    *I liked the information
    You need to improve your puncuation,connectives and openers

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