Dear diary,
I can’t believe what I have done!
Over came with guilt, I have slathered my dear cousin King Dunkan. How stupid
was I to think I would get away with murder? Why did I commit this vile attack?
Continually, I entered the massive bed chamber where King Dunkan’s dead body
lay. While I was gambling with my life I didn’t all this depression was all for
my selfish needs. I was feeling melancholy.
As I was
playing with danger, I had an emotional break down and started to regret my
actions. But a seed of ambition was planted in me by the wicked witches, all I
wanted was to keep the witches prophecy and run a happy city.
On the other
hand, I am over joyed as I am a step closer to becoming a king.
By Bilal
What a incredible piece of work. I wish I could write like that.
ReplyDeletewhat a great piece but next time use more adjectives
ReplyDeleteA wonderful piece of work and the great feelings and thoughts are great. Also, you used lots of adjectives.
ReplyDeleteYou only need to work on your complex sentences.
Good vocab.
ReplyDeleteGood connectives.
*Better puntuation
Amazing vocablary and operners but try not to use i alot but a amazing piace of work keep it up
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